㈠ 怎样才能写出好的雅思作文开头
雅思写作如何在一个小时内快速完成两篇文章还要保证质量。在雅思大作文中，很多同学只注重主体段的练习和论点论据的提炼，很少有精力关注开头段。作为文章给考官的第一印象，其实雅思作文的开头段更为重要。如何写好开头段，雅思小编为大家详解。
大作文开头技巧：
1) 抛弃冗长模板
"使用模板，一律四分"的说法或许有些夸张，但也在一定程度上反映了考官对于模板的深恶痛绝。其实模板套句并不是不能用，而是要运用灵活，不留痕迹。在很多文章中，开头结尾的两个复杂到爆炸的长句在通篇简单句和基础语法错误的映衬下格外醒目，这种稍微有些英语知识的人都会识破的小聪明，更不可能逃过考官的眼睛。
建议学生们积累一些简单实用的基本套句，如：
我们的生活已离不开…
We can not imagine our life without (the mobile phone)。
我们随处都可以看到…/使用…
(An increasing use of machines) is now being witnessed everywhere。
(Fast food such as KFC and Mcdonald's)now could be found everywhere。
…已成为一个不断增长的趋势。
(Urbanization) has established itself as a growing trend。
There emerged a growing trend that (people are pouring into urban areas)。
越来越多的人选择…/倾向于认为…
More and more people are choosing (to study abroad)。
More and more people tend to believe that (more risks than benefits have been brought by air travel)。
…已经不再罕见
It is not uncommon to see that (female leaders are playing an equally important role as their male counterparts in various areas)。
It is not uncommon to see (people performing everyday task and even working at home)。
人们开始意识到…
People are beginning to realize (the side effects of television on family relationship)。
在几十年前，…很少有人会想象到…
Several decades ago, few people could have imagined that (our life would have changed so greatly e to the use of Internet)。
2) 开头具体化
具体化的开头是6分以及6分以上文章的一大特点，即 "要让考官觉得你这个开头是完全针对题目写出来的"，要做到这一点，就必须紧紧围绕话题展开。比如下面这道题目：
The development of technology changes the way people interact with each other. In what ways does technology affect the types of relationships people make? Is it a positive or negative development?
(开头段一) As a matter of fact, the issue on the effects of science and technology is a complex and controversial one. Different indivials can hold various opinions e to their distinct backgrounds, therefore, there is no universal answer to this question. In some areas, some people believe that technology has brought benefits on people's relationship, in other fields, others mountain that it has some side effects。
(开头段二) It is undeniable that science and technology has played an increasingly important role in modern society. The benefits brought by such trend are obvious, but problems have also been welled up. As for its influences on people's relationship, I believe the advantages brought by technology outweigh its drawbacks。
(开头段三) Even two decades ago, few people could have imagined that we can perform our daily tasks via computer. Now more and more people are choosing to do the shopping, banking and even work online. So how can such trend affect the interactions between modern-day people? I will give my answer in the following essay。
开头段一为典型的模板式开头，废话多，与话题关系小，毫无疑问会引起考官的反感。开头段二虽然也使用了模板句， 但运用较灵活，不足之处是背景句没有紧扣话题，虽然谈到科技影响生活但没有具体到'relationship'。开头段三语言虽简单但紧紧围绕话题'relationships'展开，灵活的使用了一些简短的小套句，而这样具体化的开头最受考官青睐。
3) 简单即是美
雅思作文考的不是文学修养而是学术写作能力，即如何运用语言有效的表达观点证明观点，因此，简单明了的开头会给考官留下效率高的好印象，而且简单的开头段避免了使用模板的嫌疑也节省了时间。
例：
Science and technology have changed people's relationships significantly, which I believe has more benefits than risks。
It is argued that more risks than benefits have been brought by the development of technology on people's relationships. Personally, I can hardly agree with this opinion.
最后，写作重在练习，所谓熟能生巧，开头段的构思亦是一样。
以上就是雅思大作文开头段怎样写才能出彩的详细内容，在了解之后，雅思考生要多多参考学习，定能节节高升。
㈡ 干货，如何写好雅思大作文开头段
在雅思写作中，一个好的开头段不仅抓住读者的注意力，引起阅读兴趣，亦要点明中心论点，统领全文， 其重要性可见一斑。在雅思大作文的写作中， 开头段一般由general statement，argument， thesis statement两部分构成。每个人的情况不同，也可以登录文都国际教育官网进行一对一的咨询。
1General Statement
General Statement的主要作用是介绍写作背景，引入话题。
但是值得注意的是：不能照抄题目，应用同义词、近义词替换题目中的相关词语，
并用不同的句子结构来改写题目中的句子结构。例如：
Example 1:
It is widely believed that mothers are by nature better parents than
fathers. It is therefore more important for mothers to spend time with
children than fathers. Others think fathers make equally good parents.
What is your opinion?
在这个题目中，首先我们可以看到题干表述用了三个句子，首先我们要区分哪句是general statement， 哪句是arguments.
其实很容易发现，通常句中间有明显阐述观点表达的，就是arguments, 而做客观陈述的就是general
statement，其位置一般是题目的第一句。上题中 It is widely believed that mothers are by
nature better parents than fathers，
就是我们要拿来做同义改写，放到我们开头段作为背景的句子。同义改写可以采取以下技巧：
1 同义句型转换。
如 It is widely believed that… 这个句套表达某事情是众所周的，它有很多同义句型，如 It is generally assumed that…, Common knowledge is that…, 等。
2 同义词，近义词，同义结构转换。
如by nature 这个介词词组表达的含义是，自然天性上的，在原句中作为be动词的表语，我们可以改写为一个同义名词词组，nurturing instinct，自然天性的意思。相应的，前面的谓语动词要发生变化，搭配have。
3 造并列结构。
有的时候我们可能发现原题中的表述无论词语还是句型都不是很轻易的可以找出同义结构出来，那么我们可以采取并列结构，即并列两个近义词语义，或者反义词再加否定结构。
上题中的better parents than 可以改为 better or less dispensable parents than
通过上面的三个步骤，我们就可以成功的将原题的背景句改写为我们开头段的general statement。
原题：It is widely believed that mothers are by nature better parents than fathers.
改写完后：It is generally assumed that women have a ‘nurturing
instinct’that somehow makes them better or less dispensable parents than
fathers are.
General Statement常用句型：
With the development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in…in the past few years. (虽常用，但已被滥用，建议减少使用)
Along with the increasingly rapid _____________, more problems are brought to our attention.
The issue of whether or not __________ has been widely/ heatedly/ debated currently/recently.
When it comes to whether …, some… are strongly against it, claiming….
It is generally accepted/ It is indeed the case that most countries have seen an increase in _______ over recent years.
2Argument(争议)
Argument即为题目表述的观点的立场，不同题目的立场表述大有不同。
(1)有的题目中只有一个立场
e.g. Countries with a long average working time are more economically
successful than those countries which do not have a long working time.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
在我们写的开头段，在写完general statement后，直接用One point is that…把原题的立场(countries
with a long average working time are more economically successful than
those countries which do not have a long working time) 同义转述即可。
值得注意的是，这个题目本身没有背景句，所以写general statement的时候，需要我们根据题目的argument进行总结。
亦或者可以general statement 和argument这两个部分合并为一个部分，
这个题目可写成：The issue of whether or not countries with a long average
working hours are more successful in terms of economic development than
those countries which do not have a long working time has been heatedly
debated currently. As far as I am concerned, …
(2)有的题目中包含两个互相否定或者相关的立场
e.g. Some scientists think it is very soon that computers will be
more intelligent than human. Some people think it is a positive
development, while others think it is a negative development. Discuss
both views and give your own opinion.
e.g. Some people think the best way to rece crimes is to give
longer prison sentence. Others,however, think there are better
alternative ways to rece crime. Discuss and give your opinion.
这样的题目，在开头段写完general statement后，要把题目双方的立场都转述，不可减少或删除一方立场。
如 Some people think it is a positive development, while others think
it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own
opinion.
可以转述为：Quite a few people claim that it has brought great benefits. On
the other hand, those who think differently argue that it inevitably
would has negative influence.
3Thesis Statement (总论点)
Thesis Statement简单来说就是作者对某一写作话题所持的明确观点。例如：
1 In my opinion/ As far as I am concerned/ To my mind, students should wear uniforms in school.
2 While the majority may like to live in a large family, I prefer to the small one.
在雅思写作中，文章的立场，也就是全文的总论点，
主要分两种：有倾向性立场和两边支持
有倾向性(一边倒)
有倾向性的立场一般在文章的开头即表明本文的立场，同意或者不同意，或者多大程度地同意和不同意。
在剑桥雅思的考官范文中，有一个题目涉及对教育免费的商榷：All ecation,primary, secondary school
and further ecation, should be free to all people and paid for by the
government. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
考官在范文的开头段中即明确表明自己的立场：I certainly agree with the statement that this should be the case.
当然，有倾向性的立场还包含让步的观点，这种立场的文章多见于以to what extent do you agree or disagree?提问的论题。
如：Environmental problems should be solved by the government instead
of indivials and private companies. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
在考官范文的开头段中，立场是这样表明的：I concede that the government should lead the
efforts in addressing the environmental problems. Nevertheless,
cooperation and participation from the cooperations and indivial
citizens are essential as well.
让步的立场并不需要纠结于在句子中回答到底agree 或者disagree没有, 清楚的说明自己的观点即可。
值得注意的是，观点有倾向性并不代表思路有局限性。在辩论中，作者既要证明自己的观点，同时也要回应对方的观点，也就是说能够站在不同的角度看同一个事情，并且能看到各自的优劣。
两边都支持
这种文章立场一般常见于discuss both view and give your opinion这种提问方式的题目。立场一般建议在结尾段点明，并且要在结尾段明确题干两者之间的关系。
(4) 开头段的两种常用写作方法
将以上三个部分组合起来，我们步难得出开头段的以下两种写法：
A. General Statement – Positive+Negative Idea – Thesis Statement
The issue of whether or not students should take a part-time job has
been widely/ heatedly debated currently/ recently. Quite a few people
claim that it would not only widen their horizon but also help shape
their personalities. On the other hand, those who think differently
argue that the task of a student is to make good use of his limited time
and acquire necessary knowledge and skill for the future career. As for
me/ As far as I am concerned/ In my opinion, I believe that part-time
jobs play a positive role in the development of university students.
这种方法的一个变形形式是：
General Statement – Opposite Idea – Thesis Statement
Nowadays the incomes of many sport stars are truly astounding. Some
people claim that the salaries of athletes are too high and the athletes
themselves attract too much attention. Yet, in my opinion, such
benefits are well deserved.
B. General Statement – Concession – Thesis Statement
When it comes to whether students should be allowed to work outside
the school hours, some ecators vote against it, claiming that
part-time work may have a negative influence on their study. Obviously,
too large amount of time a student is employed may contribute to a poor
academic performance. However, if they do a part-time job over
reasonable hours, it is extremely beneficial for them, providing
financial support for their study and broadening their horizon.
When evaluating a job applicant, most companies would place much
weight on one’s ecational certificate. Of course, one’s ecational
certificate does tell something about the applicant. However, it is not
the only means through which we can judge whether the applicant is
qualified or not.
㈢ 雅思大作文如何写好开头段
雅思写作如何在一个小时内快速完成两篇文章还要保证质量。在雅思大作文中，很多同学只注重主体段的练习和论点论据的提炼，很少有精力关注开头段。作为文章给考官的第一印象，其实雅思作文的开头段更为重要。如何写好开头段，雅思小编为大家详解。
大作文开头技巧：
1) 抛弃冗长模板
"使用模板，一律四分"的说法或许有些夸张，但也在一定程度上反映了考官对于模板的深恶痛绝。其实模板套句并不是不能用，而是要运用灵活，不留痕迹。在很多文章中，开头结尾的两个复杂到爆炸的长句在通篇简单句和基础语法错误的映衬下格外醒目，这种稍微有些英语知识的人都会识破的小聪明，更不可能逃过考官的眼睛。
建议学生们积累一些简单实用的基本套句，如：
我们的生活已离不开…
We can not imagine our life without (the mobile phone)。
我们随处都可以看到…/使用…
(An increasing use of machines) is now being witnessed everywhere。
(Fast food such as KFC and Mcdonald's)now could be found everywhere。
…已成为一个不断增长的趋势。
(Urbanization) has established itself as a growing trend。
There emerged a growing trend that (people are pouring into urban areas)。
越来越多的人选择…/倾向于认为…
More and more people are choosing (to study abroad)。
More and more people tend to believe that (more risks than benefits have been brought by air travel)。
…已经不再罕见
It is not uncommon to see that (female leaders are playing an equally important role as their male counterparts in various areas)。
It is not uncommon to see (people performing everyday task and even working at home)。
人们开始意识到…
People are beginning to realize (the side effects of television on family relationship)。
在几十年前，…很少有人会想象到…
Several decades ago, few people could have imagined that (our life would have changed so greatly e to the use of Internet)。
2) 开头具体化
具体化的开头是6分以及6分以上文章的一大特点，即 "要让考官觉得你这个开头是完全针对题目写出来的"，要做到这一点，就必须紧紧围绕话题展开。比如下面这道题目：
The development of technology changes the way people interact with each other. In what ways does technology affect the types of relationships people make? Is it a positive or negative development?
(开头段一) As a matter of fact, the issue on the effects of science and technology is a complex and controversial one. Different indivials can hold various opinions e to their distinct backgrounds, therefore, there is no universal answer to this question. In some areas, some people believe that technology has brought benefits on people's relationship, in other fields, others mountain that it has some side effects。
(开头段二) It is undeniable that science and technology has played an increasingly important role in modern society. The benefits brought by such trend are obvious, but problems have also been welled up. As for its influences on people's relationship, I believe the advantages brought by technology outweigh its drawbacks。
(开头段三) Even two decades ago, few people could have imagined that we can perform our daily tasks via computer. Now more and more people are choosing to do the shopping, banking and even work online. So how can such trend affect the interactions between modern-day people? I will give my answer in the following essay。
开头段一为典型的模板式开头，废话多，与话题关系小，毫无疑问会引起考官的反感。开头段二虽然也使用了模板句， 但运用较灵活，不足之处是背景句没有紧扣话题，虽然谈到科技影响生活但没有具体到'relationship'。开头段三语言虽简单但紧紧围绕话题'relationships'展开，灵活的使用了一些简短的小套句，而这样具体化的开头最受考官青睐。
3) 简单即是美
雅思作文考的不是文学修养而是学术写作能力，即如何运用语言有效的表达观点证明观点，因此，简单明了的开头会给考官留下效率高的好印象，而且简单的开头段避免了使用模板的嫌疑也节省了时间。
例：
Science and technology have changed people's relationships significantly, which I believe has more benefits than risks。
It is argued that more risks than benefits have been brought by the development of technology on people's relationships. Personally, I can hardly agree with this opinion.
最后，写作重在练习，所谓熟能生巧，开头段的构思亦是一样。
㈣ 雅思作文:开头,三个理由和结尾
总的观点是不同意（不同意应该比较好写吧）
一，开头：当代电脑很流行，因此有人提议说……（题目），对于这个观点，I find it ill-founded.
二，主体
1.让步，电脑的正面好处
2.但是博物馆和艺术馆是不可替代的 原因1：精神因素，原因2：儿童教育因素（自己编吧，任意两个合理的都可以） 这些都是电脑没办法提供的。。。
三，再次重申观点
其实写法很多，条理清晰既可，但能够尽可能谈到两个方面，并发掘两者内在联系是关键。
（我自己也不是写作大师，雅思作文也只考了6.5，小小意见希望对你有帮助。）
㈤ 雅思大作文开头段的写法当中 背景怎么写
无论是大多数考生备考雅思的过程中，还是从历年来雅思考试四项的中国考生平均分，都可以反映出中国考生在雅思写作方面的薄弱。因为写作是最能体现个人的语言运用能力和水平的，所以不像其他课程可以通过短期的特训得到很快的提高，而是要求考生花时间对词汇，句型，语法等等内容的整理，记忆，以及运用。
在具体写作的过程中，考生要遇到的第一步事情应该是引言段的写作。俗话说，万事开头难。很多考生不知道如何开头，浪费时间，导致无法在规定时间内完成250个单词的大作文。其实，引言段可先通过对background 的描写来引出话题。
II Background 方法介绍
总结归纳Background的写作，认为应该从内容同句型上同时做到补充。下面先介绍下扩充背景句的方法：
1）. 追根溯源法。即从题目给出的话题中找出这个现象产生的原因来扩展背景句。这种方法适合大多数的话题，考生要尽量在考前做练习，这样在考试就可以得心应手了。
请看下面的例子：
There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones? (高分范文P76)
这个题目中给出的话题是mobile phone，所以考生可以从它产生的原因来考虑，就是科技的繁荣，而科技的繁荣，手机的广泛使用是在20世纪末，这样背景句就有内容可写了。当然要通过相应的句型来写了。如
… (time) witnessed …
这个背景句就可以写成： The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including the mobile phone.
再看一例：
Nowadays, some universities offer students skills that assist them to find employment, but some people believe that the main function of a university should be to provide students with access to knowledge for its sake. What is your opinion?
这题要求大家讨论大学是提供职业技能还是传授知识。那从传统观点来看，大学是传授知识的地方，为什么会提出要传授技能呢，所以这里考生也可以用追根溯源法思考下，大家肯定可以想到是由于找工作已经成为当今教育的目的之一了，所以很多大学就转移到以传授技能为主了。那当然还是要结合句型，这里可以用as 引导的原因状语从句。
参考：As job-hunting has become one of the main purposes of university ecation, the majority of the universities tend to offer vocational trainings to prepare the students for their future career.
2）. 重述法。即对关于这个话题的当前现状的重述。
请看一例：
Nowadays, people are facing more and more work-related stress. State the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how to combat it。
本题的话题关于压力，那考生可从当前社会现象来考虑这个问题，考生不难想出当下对压力这一现象的情况，即很多人都在承受着或多或少的压力。可用it is generally believed that … 形式主语的句型。
参考: It is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collars workers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming from work.
再看一例：
Environmental problem is too big for indivial countries and indivial people to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
本题话题为环境问题，考生也可用重述法对当前环境问题进行重述，这时，可以用In modern society/ At present, 等表时间的介词短语来引导一个叙述句型。
参考：In modern society, environment related issues have confronted ecological scientists, government agencies and the general public. (引自雅思高分范文p16)
3）. 定义法。即通过对话题词的定义的介绍，这种方法有一定难度，考生需要有渊博的知识，才能做到对名词的解释，但对特别明显的词语，考生可借鉴这种方法。
请看一例：
The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
本题中的话题词为图书馆，可以解释的词也是图书馆比较方便容易。那么到底如何解释呢，比如说图书馆在传统意义上来看，是收藏书的地方，而现在因为科技发展，使得图书馆的意义发生改变，从而引出话题。这里同样可以用形式主语：
It is generally believed that public libraries are places with a large collection of books; however, the digital time has given it a new means of storing and retrieving information.
III Background 句型介绍：
从以上的分析，内容上是有方法了，不难从内容上找材料，可是如果句型积累不多的话，写出来的句子也是无法得到高分的，所以接下来，介绍下常用的高分句型。
1）. It is … that …
It is … who … 强调句型
Eg It is the traditions in Beijing that attract many foreign tourists.
下面是考官范文里的句子：
It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person’s personality and dictates how that personality develops.
2）. It is generally believed
It is the case that …
It is apparent that … 等形式主语
Eg It is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collar workers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming from work.
3）. 状语前置
下面是剑6的高分范文中的句子:
In spite of this, the obvious benefits of computer skills for young children cannot be denied.
Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.
4）. 时间引导的叙述句型
Lately, the problem of unemployment has been brought to popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.
你可通过这两个方面来做到背景句的描写，从而在开头就吸引考官的注意力，好的开始是成功的一半，有了好的开始，在写作中做到思路清晰，以及节省时间都打了坚实的基础
㈥ 雅思大作文跑题了，但发现了，改好了主体段，开头结尾没来得及改能得多少分啊
算逻辑问题，就是结构吧，这只是一个方面，还有其他方面的评分，如果你句型和词汇丰富，没有太大的语法问题，5分左右还是有希望的，放松点，只是一个考试而已，没到目标分数再来吧，有梦想的人永远值得尊敬！
㈦ 雅思作文的开头结尾怎么写
雅思写作对于雅思备考的同学来讲都是一个不小的难点。俗话说“万事开头难”想要写出一篇好的文章。写好开头段是很重要的。那么雅思写作开头段怎么写呢?下面小编给大家分享关于雅思写作开头段的相关内容，希望可以帮到正在雅思备考的同学。
雅思写作开头段怎么写要素之一： Restatement of the Topic
(雅思写作大作文的题目都会给出相关情景或话题，在首段中应先对题目中的情景或话题进行展开。)
方法一：改写。即按照雅思写作题目所给的内容，用不同的表达方法重新写一遍，千万不能抄袭。但改一两个词不算改写，一定要将整个表达方式改掉。
方法二：自己展开。即根据雅思写作题目所谈到的话题内容适当展开，简单谈谈目前社会中的情况怎样。但不要谈得太多，更不能偏题。这需要大量的雅思写作辅导，大家在私底下要勤加练习。
雅思写作开头段怎么写要素之二：Express Your Opinion (雅思写作大作文的题目中一般会问你 do you
agree or disagree 或 what do you think
等，因此必须与之相对应地在首段中表明你的观点。)
方法一：中立观点。可以说某种做法既有好又有坏;对某种观点有人同意又有人不同意等等。较好的表达如I
partly agree with the opinion expressed above.
方法二：一边倒观点。即直截了当地说赞成某个观点或不赞成某个观点。
方法三：不表达观点。即不在首段明确地表达自己的观点，但必须要先分析一下，在末尾一段表明观点。
方法一在雅思写作考试中用得比较多;方法二适中;方法三用得比较少。
雅思写作开头段怎么写要素之三：No Excessive Background
(雅思写作大作文首段中只要涵盖以上两要素即可，不要写过多不相干的展开内容，更不要将理由写进去，否则主体段便没内容写了。)
㈧ 跪求一个万能的雅思大作文的开头和结尾。
我来写个吧
In the present age, ..... are playing significant roles in our lives(如果第一句写社会背景想要介绍下不好的现象也回可以这样写 In the present age, the issue of... is increasingly disturbing). But in the meantime, whether...(这个地方写要辩论的话题，改答写下题目好了）has sparked much debate. Some people argue that.... while many other consider that... Personally, I am in favor of the former(前者) / the latter(后者）view.
结尾：
In summary, I would concede that...m even though..., Overall, I am convinced that... should...
㈨ 雅思大作文写到最后我总是不知道该如何收尾
雅思大作文模板的漂亮结尾
雅思大作文模板的漂亮结尾!一个好的结尾自然也会为作文带来很高的分数,因此同学们在复习的过程中,不要仅仅侧重于一个漂亮的开头,也要适当的来关注我们作文的结尾,这样才能够让我们的大作文拿到高分!
1. “烂招”解救烤鸭于危难
在巨大的时间压力下,很可能你没有来得及写末段,请记住这个“烂招”:写下In conclusion, I personally believe that ……, 在省略号部分抄上原题的观点。比如最近有一道考题:Some people think that economic progress is the most important way to
measure a country's success. Other people think other factors are also
important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
在剩下最后一分钟时写下:In conclusion, personally, I believe that economic progress is not the most
important way to measure a country’s success, and other facts must be
taken into consideration.
这个末段给人一种强烈的“扣题”感,理由很明显,紧紧地扣住题目啦!